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5th Period Group 3's Creative Story

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Jack Hackett, Jake Shumard, Jonathan Pickens, Robert Dicks
Culminating Activity
Period 5
Mrs.Byars
The Perfect Life
In the biggest double wide in rural Arkansas dwelled two brothers. The two brothers couldn’t have been more different. Jimmy was buff and handsome, Jimmy always attained the ladies. On the other hand Dale was U-G-L-Y. Not only was he ugly he smelled like a flattened out skunk on the south GA highway. Dale’s only goal in life was to be a deft NASCAR driver. But he was an inept diver.                                           It was at Dale’s birthday and Jimmy and Dale went to work at McDonalds as usual. In the middle of the day the entire sudden Jimmy says,” I have an announce to make.” It’s my brother fatty the fatso, skunky the skunk, and Dale the nobody’s birthday”. This made Dale have an extreme grudge against Jimmy.
          Later that night Dale had decided to have revenge against Jimmy because he was aggravated. But he just didn’t know how. Then all of the sudden a distinct idea popped in his head. He was going to make the nastiest drink ever and shrouded it as a Coke. He gave it to Jimmy. Dale acted like he was sick so he stayed at home while Jimmy went to work. While he was gone Dale found the worst things possible and made a drink out of it. But before it was ready he needed to wait a while.
          He had better things to do than just sit around, so he went inside to his infested home. He had a race coming up that day, so his Manager thought the catastrophe of a concoction was gas so he put it in his racecar. At the race Dale beat all the racers he was competing with. He beat them by a drastic difference of up to 10 laps! He figured out that the drink could be used as gas. As soon as he new the oil companies started using his efficient “oil”. He got the oil companies to sell it and his earnings became lofty and had many possessions. He named his product “Smelly Dales” because he just smashed it onto Jimmy’s face. In the end instead of living in a mobile home the brothers Jimmy and Dale lived in a massive mansion. In the end Dale triumphed over Jimmy.

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